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Reply BK_1/VGKid, January 20th, 2010, 5:22 am


Reply video_gamegurl, January 20th, 2010, 5:24 am

I'm such a pervert...

Reply Weaved, January 20th, 2010, 2:22 pm

........ I'll go and join the person above me in drooling naow, yes? xD

Reply Yuuki-san (Guest), January 20th, 2010, 2:34 pm

Good lord! Not to be rude or anything, but you REALLY need to work on your anatomy, and drawing backgrounds, your drawing is atrocious. I suggest drawing with a pencil, and looking up anatomy tutorials on DA and various other art related websites (especially sites where you can learn to draw genitalia.), it would do you a world of good. ><

Reply Seirai, January 20th, 2010, 4:40 pm

May I please kill the guest who just trashed you if I can find them? Beceause I utterly disagree... I mean, the third panel here is slightly off-looking, but that's only due to the angle it's drawn at.

Reply Midnight_Luna, January 20th, 2010, 5:27 pm

I think your anatomy is better than most people's so that's fine with me. I love panel two.

Reply Yuuki-san (Guest), January 20th, 2010, 6:00 pm

Seirai Good god child, you're blind aren't you?!?! I am so sorry, it must be so difficult for you in a world full of IMAGERY! D: I am so sad for you, you cannot see shapeless creatures before you, such as the E-brake (This belongs to a CAR.) that is disguised as a penis on that young man-lizard-child. Wow, it's sad how a simple critique always winds up with some fan-tard commenting on a comic/image that isn't even their's, and turns it into the critic being a hating ass, instead of someone trying to help out. THANK YOU!!!!!! *coughfaggotcough*

Reply Minor Catastrophe, January 20th, 2010, 8:52 pm

Okay, I agree with the anatomy statement, but your saying of, "I'm not trying to be rude." was an epic fail. There are nicer ways to say people need to work on things rather than telling them it's "atrocious."

Reply Yuuki-san (Guest), January 20th, 2010, 9:10 pm

Minor Catastrophe Yeeah, I guess I could have been, it wasn't a fail though, I usually am much more of a dick so by how I talk it sounded much nicer. Saying "Atrocious" is nothing epic though, epic is much more exaggerated like "IT FUCKING SUX GRANNY COCK!!! LAWL!!", that would be more of an epic fail of trying to be nice.

Reply Vlad (Guest), January 20th, 2010, 9:23 pm

moo How in the fucking world was atrocious not a polite and proper way to explain that there is something wrong with this artist current work? whatever honestly what the hell does it matter someone was just pointing out that there needs to be some work done to adjust some things on this drawing. God damn Smack Jeeves makes me hard..hmmmmmm

Reply MoonLover, January 20th, 2010, 10:40 pm

Yes, I suck at drawing gentials and my anatomy needs work. I'm *working* on it, duh. Just because of a couple shit looking pages, doesn't mean I can't draw for crap. When on a good day, I happen to draw majestic cocks, thankyouverymuch. (Like next page coming up)

Funny you should mention DA, I happen to be on there, and I have a friend who helped out on critizing my work (Although she hasn't seen this comic)

And no, I don't use pencil anymore. And I don't plan to.

You should've seen Lizard- (correction: Dragon)dude's peenz before I edited it, it looked like something out of a morbid film. Yeah, be glad I shielded your eyes from that.

That being said, I *KNOW* my anatomy needs improving. >) And I will improve, don't you worry about that.

Reply Sonamae, January 20th, 2010, 11:34 pm

All the drama aside I like the comic because it's consistent and has a script. (Sure it's pron and cute cheesy fluff, but I'm all for that and love reading these updates)

You draw better than I do consistency wise so I give you bonus points.

Reply Yuuki-san (Guest), January 21st, 2010, 1:56 am

MoonLover Lol, I never said you couldn't draw for crap, you just have things you need to work on (Pretty much just like everyone else in the world who does anything.), honestly your art are better than ALLOT of people's art. Yeah, it's not bad to get help from different sources sometimes, looking at how other people create different forms of the same idea can be fun, and learning from those different things can be incredibly rewarding down the road.
Dragon, lizard, same thing (Serious, a dragon is just a giant ass lizard.), none-the-less that does some really funny. I'm glad you're confident on improving, it's not very fun to get into something if you're not planning on becoming a damned pro at it!

Reply WiltedBlackOrchid2012 (Guest), February 2nd, 2010, 11:54 pm

Another hater for Yuuki-san If you got nothing nice to say, don't say nothing at all. Haven't you ever seen Bambi?Oh wait, you probably put it aside do to the deers haveing human eyes ^-^

Reply WiltedBlackOrchid2012 (Guest), February 2nd, 2010, 11:59 pm

MoonLover Genitals are friggen hard to draw,Hell I won't even step down that road but fuck At least you did.I lost my will to draw anatomy many adays ago T-T
but I'll keep at it.(I enjoy the vocab being passed around in the comment patch ^-^)

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